Hey, so I think the title might be against our jam rules. Would you mind changing it? Thanks!
Adhere to the golden ratio
V. Adhere to the golden ratio
Give your woman 2/3 of everything she gives you. For every three calls or texts, give her two back. Three declarations of love earn two in return. Three gifts; two nights out. Give her two displays of affection and stop until she has answered with three more. When she speaks, you reply with fewer words. When she emotes, you emote less.
- Commandment V
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Sorry for the late reply. So the original concept was from a website which featured a page called "The Sixteen Commandments..." of which I found the fifth to be relevant. However I am having trouble thinking of how best to balance between appropriateness and plagiarism... The website also contains more... adult themes (in text), so I could also remove the citation link. How do you think I should best go around doing this without plagiarizing?
I think you can keep the citation, as long as you put a note that it contains adult themes. I don't think you need to worry about plagiarism in your title, as I believe this falls under fair use. The title is a bit too sexual, so as long as you fix that we're good.
I think I changed it everywhere. Let me know if there are any other problems.